Grammar Catastrophes

A blog about catastrophic failures to deploy English grammar effectively.

This goes way beyond the Oxford comma

Saturday, February 05, 2005

Phil

In this Washington Post article about the fate of red-light cameras in Northern Virginia, the following sentence appears:

"The cameras are used in Alexandria, Fairfax City, Falls Church and Vienna and Arlington and Fairfax counties."
Gregory has already discussed (in passing) the use of the Oxford comma. While some commas would certainly help this poor sentence, more drastic measures are required. The last four items on the list are joined by "and." Moreover, it is not entirely clear that only Arlington and Fairfax are counties. I suggest the following revision:
"The cameras are used in the cities of Alexandria, Fairfax, Falls Church, and Vienna, as well as the counties of Arlington and Fairfax."
This is still a little shaky, but since Vienna is technically a town, things are a bit easier:
"The cameras are used in the cities of Alexandria, Fairfax, and Falls Church, the town of Vienna, and the counties of Arlington and Fairfax."
Much better.

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